You carried a duffel bag
and carbine rifle aboard the KC-97.
As your plane taxied for take-off,
I held our baby son
more tightly.
See you in a little while.
Your words beat inside my heart
louder than the plane’s big engines
which roared into another country
some hours later.
Your letters came regularly, at first,
then stopped
abruptly.
Missing in Action the uniformed
officers came to tell me.
Your name is engraved
on the Wall of Vietnam Veterans,
forever in my heart
and in the heart of our son
who enlisted yesterday.
See you in a little while.
His words echoed yours
as he departed.
My words stuck in my throat,
reached into my heart and
chipped at the ice caked there.
I watched another determined
young man report for duty
and I begged, oh, please
Dear God, please.
© Freeda Baker Nichols
I especially like the lines: “See you in a little while. Your words beat inside my heart
louder than the plane’s big engines”
Poignant, powerful!
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Thanks for your kind words, Dorothy.
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Awh that is so heart-breaking, Freeda.
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Poetry is so many things — this is one of my favorites.
I commend you, Catherine, on your post today about getting the Doodlers to draw the cover of Jody Hedlund’s book, Rebellious Heart. You are so kind and helpful to other writers.
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Thanks, Freeda. Teamwork is awesome. :0)
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I had read the poem before. It is very poignant . The plane pix are neat. 🙂
Sent from my iPhone
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Thanks, Tammy.
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Nice poem, Freeda, and timeless. The pain of young men going to war will never change.
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Thanks, Dot. And you’re right about the pain will never change.
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It’s time to bring our young men and women home. They are sent across the oceans into another country on foreign lands they roam.
The loved ones they left behind are praying, wishing begging oh please bring our loved ones back home to us.
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Yes, it’s time.
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If this is a true writing…your heart must be breaking for sure!…mine would…
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Not true. Only parts of it is true. The first six lines are true. The words he said when he boarded the plane are true. Only that. The rest is from a poet’s heart.
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It certainly could have been…but, so glad it wasn’t….My Bobby and I were only married a month when he left for Viet Nam…No baby…thank goodness…
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Thank you!
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