Old Man Winter

My post today is a poem in the Butterfly Pattern.  It’s an easy little verse that’s fun to write and share. It’s a one-sentence flitting thought with syllable count of 8-8-4-4-8-8 in rhyme a-a-b-b-c-c.  It is often iambic meter.

Old Man Winter

When Old Man Winter came to town,
he brought the snow and plopped it down,
and dropped ice, tooSnow
from fingers blue
and when at last he goes away,
we’ll welcome then a cool spring day.

© 2015 Freeda Baker Nichols
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Is anyone ready for spring? I think I am, but I would like one more lovely snow, without ice, please.

12 comments on “Old Man Winter

  1. I liked the Butterfly pattern. Lovely poem. Maybe I’ll try writing one.

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  2. want a snow before Spring slides in…I’ve missed not having any this year…( I thought if I said that …it might come soon)…lol!

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  3. Catherine Johnson says:

    That’s very sweet, Freeda. I agree. The kids are really enjoying gong sledding right now.

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  4. Short but to the point 🙂

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  5. Sweet little poem. I’m thinking about spring, too.

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  6. Anonymous says:

    Sweet little poem. I’m thinking about spring too!

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