6 comments on “The Drip of an Icicle

  1. Catherine Johnson says:

    Beautiful, Freeda!
    If you want to make this 5 7 5 and combine the meaning of first two lines you could do this.
    The four icicles
    Drip away to nothingness
    in rays of the sun.

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