The sun is changing now for night–
a pink delight.
I watch it fade
and masquerade.
When darkened clouds turn dapple-gray,
I’ll turn away
with aching heart.
I’ll fall apart
’cause NaPoWriMo must erase
my happy face
in silhouette–
the day we met.
© Copyright, 2013, Freeda Baker Nichols
This poem is in the Minute form and it’s the last of 30 poems for NaPoWriMo in the month of April. It’s been a busy time and I’ve had fun. Thanks to everyone who has viewed my poems and/or “liked” them or left a comment. It’s been a great adventure, good discipline, something to look forward to each day. Now, back to my short story. Never a dull moment for a writer and a poet!
Beautiful poem, very well written
LikeLike
Thank you.
LikeLike
Congratulations on 30 days of poetry!
LikeLike
Thanks. I’m enjoying the break by working on my fiction story!
LikeLike
Perfect final poem! Congratulations and hope you are enjoying your break!
LikeLike
Thanks, Inger. Yes, it’s a relief to feel free to work on other things, but actually, I miss the statistics. The stats have certainly dropped. 🙂
LikeLike
They say those stats can be addictive 😉
LikeLike
They must be! 🙂
LikeLike
[…] Goodbyes Are Better Left Unsaid – – – – – – day 30 napowrimo (freedanichols.wordpress.com) […]
LikeLike
what an achievement…but, I’m sure your ready for your short story writing…
hope we get a taste…
LikeLike
We’ll see about an excerpt, maybe. No promise. Having a lovely spring day here. Hope you are, too.
LikeLike
Ours is a hot day and I’m grateul for it…Makes me get out of doors and enjoy the sights…
LikeLike
Nature has many beautiful sights waiting for us to see.
LikeLike
[…] Goodbyes Are Better Left Unsaid – – – – – – day 30 napowrimo (freedanichols.wordpress.com) […]
LikeLike
Congrats on the 30 days of poems. Love the sunset theme for closing the month and challenge. Happy writing…
LikeLike
Thanks, and happy writing to you, as well . . .
LikeLike
What a beautiful finale, Freeda! Congrats on 30 poems in 30 days. You inspire me every day.
LikeLike
Congratulations to you also for your poems during this month. Hang in there! I plan to continue writing new ones but not one every day! 🙂
LikeLike