Senryu or Haiku?

She said it.
He said it.
I read it.
Therefore, it must be true–
my senryu is a haiku.
So who ever knew
that one was
and the other was not?
Surely not I
and certainly not me
and now I’m blue
as blue can be
because my haiku
is not my senryu.

 

c Copyright 2013, Freeda Baker Nichols

 

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  4. kayladean says:

    I really enjoyed this poem. It made me think of gossip. Maybe I’m just bringing too much to the work after this week, but anyway…I like it.

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  6. Ginger Kemp Pruett says:

    WHEW!! If i cant find out what you knew and i dont know where to go to what do i do to find out the meaning of haiku, or should i say senryu. Just having some fun with what you have done by posting a poem a day for everyone. Thanks for the month of daily poems….have enjoyed. 🙂

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